Peer Feedback - Comments and Improvements

From this feedback from my peers I will improve my magazine front cover by adding a website either on the cover or when I come to producing my contents page. Furthermore, I will try to make the key point of the magazine clearer by changing the size of some text to make the main aspects large.

 

 

Comments	Improvements
Writing on masthead - I like	Possible website?
Image and layout is very nice	Website and contact number?
Image layout, bold, eye catching, I like band logos	Slightly hard to focus on key points

Fifth Draft

I really like this image, as its very intense and the lighting (mise-en-scene) relates to one of the three main house style colours which is red.

Draft Four

This is my Fourth Draft. I feel asif there is a lot of negative space to the right of the top of the image. This is why i will continue to edit my draft until i get a final front cover i am happy with (done to meet deadlines therefore continuing with this in my spare time will improve them). 

Draft Three

 

 

I like this draft because the image stands out with the mast head due to the head of the model being above the mast head. The use of two colours for text allows the magazine to be verisimilitude and create realism to it.

Final Image of Draft Two

 

This draft is my favourite. Even though the text is usually on the left side of the page of magazines, mine is on the left but i feel that it works. The only aspect which i may change is the Main cover line "CHLO DUNN" and change it to the layout as seen in draft 4.

Developments of Draft two

First draft

This is my least favourite. I've not used a good enough mixture of text and the mast head is right at the top of the page. As seen in my other drafts, i changed this so i would have a plug splash at the top of the page and I think it looks better that way then this. Even though it may have the main aspects of a magazine, it does not attract or look very intereseting. The image is the only aspect which would draw attention to the audience.