Wednesday, 19 December 2012

Peer Feedback - Comments and Improvements

From this feedback from my peers I will improve my magazine front cover by adding a website either on the cover or when I come to producing my contents page. Furthermore, I will try to make the key point of the magazine clearer by changing the size of some text to make the main aspects large.
 
 


Comments
Improvements
Writing on masthead - I like
Possible website?
Image and layout is very nice
Website and contact number?
Image layout, bold, eye catching, I like band logos
Slightly hard to focus on key points

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