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Chlo Dunn's comments - I think this is a very good contents page, it looks classy and simplistic. I really like how the date ans been edited to fit in with the masthead/logo. I like how everything is set out so it is easy to read and it isn't filled with writing. The bottom right photo is good because it is cut out instead of all the images just being square. I also like the font as it is easy to read makes it look more professional. I think the feature at the bottom is also good. Finally, I like the colour scheme. It's not overloaded with colour and isn't too busy. To improve I think you could maybe add a pull quote just to draw the audience in more, but otherwise,VERY GOOD!
Jamie's comments - it looks just like a real magazine! its cool and very relaxed all the pictures look great and all are organised really well, the whole poage looks really poffesional and i would pay for this. the writing looks good and clear and i like how there's lots of different sizes of font and different colours of font to highlint importance. the numbers on top of the pictures look really reallistic and match the general colour scheme it looks great all round. cant really pick any faults.
Good use of lots of different images along with page numbers on each page making it conventional and realistic. I like the use of extras along the botton as it relates again to real magazines. I think to improve you could of listed stories instead of puting them all with an image. Also the 'Stiff Little Fingers' is difficult to read because of the image overlapping it but it is a good image as it is different to the reast because it doesnt have a background.
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