Teacher feedback and my Response

From this feedback from my teacher i will make changes to the mast. The changes i will be making are: change 'cult' to black or grey then 'this week' to red. Furthurmore, i will change 'This week' to 'This week's contents' to really establish the contents page. From my peer feed back, i will also add a pull quote. Hopefully combining these improvements it will make my magazine more conventional than it already is.